i finally found someone doing something similiar to my study, yey!! anyway Positives: 1)your research is good 2) you've explained why your posts are relevant 3)and finally you've got links posted up, well done
Improvement: i think you need to do some theorist research
Your blog is similar to mine because we are both studying the representation of black Americans and racism in our film/drama.
Positive points: - You've posted up reviews which you've read and can use it to study other aspects of Crash in detail as well. - Your whole blog is looking very colourful, good good. - You've posted links up from where you've got the reviews etc.
Criticism: - I think you should use other places for research like books and magazines and post up some useful info from there
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i finally found someone doing something similiar to my study, yey!! anyway
Positives:
1)your research is good
2) you've explained why your posts are relevant
3)and finally you've got links posted up, well done
Improvement: i think you need to do some theorist research
Jaskeerat :D
Hey Harveeen!
Your blog is similar to mine because we are both studying the representation of black Americans and racism in our film/drama.
Positive points:
- You've posted up reviews which you've read and can use it to study other aspects of Crash in detail as well.
- Your whole blog is looking very colourful, good good.
- You've posted links up from where you've got the reviews etc.
Criticism:
- I think you should use other places for research like books and magazines and post up some useful info from there
Kavita
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